September 16, 2006

Bachelor # 71 A little punctuation goes a long way.

Run-on sentences can get you in trouble. He simply forgot the comma and/or capitalization, therefore, it reads like this.

"my son means the world to me. in my spare time..........family life is the most important thing to have."


(in his spare time, of course)

2 comments:

Bazza said...

Hi Mimi, I have just added links from my blog to both of yours.
ps: This is another good one. I am now relying on you for a daily chuckle!

Bazza said...

Hi Mimi. I'll gladly give you my opinion but it's certainly not 'professional'! I have thought exactly the same thing as you about people not scrolling down but I thought "Hold on, who am I blogging for? Myself or the blogosphere?". I started out on a journey of self-discovery but I soon realised this was self-deluding: Now, I have my audience in mind. This is not pretentious, it's just that I want people to read and enjoy my posts. I try to have a few stored up as drafts to post when I am busy. If you don't do that it might be a good idea to store some up. They don't have to be topical do they? I know people have short attention spans these days so I never post a very lengthy item. On balance I would say, if you've got enough material to post two a day and if that's what you want to do - go for it!